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I really liked that :D I think, though, that you should change the name from Charles- I don't particularly like that name for a teenager. :/. I think that you should give more insight into her "past." Their relationship reminds me of Edward and Bella's hahah :) but I'm not complaining, I like the relationship in the book, not the movie :/. I honestly can't criticize anything about this piece, it's beautiful :D.